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Takeshi Clan

Post by Katsu Takeshi on Sat Dec 20, 2008 6:18 am

Name: Takeshi

Elements:N/A

Jutsus:

Name:Glass Barrier
Rank:C
Element:Glass
Description:This jutsu can only be used from the clan Takeshi. The user must have sand around him/her then form it into glass, they can then manipulate it so it forms a 6 inch circle on glass that forms around the user. The glass is toughened so most stuff can not get through it.

Name:Glass Needles
Rank:C
Element:Glass
Description:This jutsu can only be used from the clan Takeshi. The user must have sand around him/her then form it into glass and then manipulate it into small glass needles. The needles are so long and thin that they can not be seen when travelling through air. The user can then throw or push the needles into the enemy.

Name:Big Glass Needle
Rank:B
Element:Glass
Description:This jutsu can only be used from the clan Takeshi. The user must have sand around him/her then form it into glass and then manipulate it into a big glass needle. The big needle can go as tall as the user wants it to be. They can then drop it on their opponent.

Description:They all have blonde hair and look a like.

Kekkei Genkai:N/A

History:The takeshi clan lived in a small village with other normal villagers, the Takeshi clan protected that village and did so well good. The village was quite near to the kohona village and they got food of them. One night the village was attacked and most of the members was pushed back into the kohona village where they live know.

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Re: Takeshi Clan

Post by Saruno Kazura on Sat Dec 20, 2008 1:49 pm

1) Your 'Glass' element would be called 'Kopputon' meaning, 'Glass Release'. This element is of Earth and Fire, so please change that accordingly, okay?

2) Jutsu could use a bit more description, please do so.

3) History, do i even need to say it? More Description.

4) Description of the clan needs more detail. Maybe like, how the economy of it is, how it has that coloration of hair, and why does it always have the people looking alike. Just some ideas.

5) And the Glass release would be a Kekkei Genkai Trait, sorry.

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